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07-09-2010 02:54 AM
I have A Lot of Work To Do. When I'm Done It Will Prolly Be around 184 Chapters.
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07-09-2010 10:50 PM
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07-09-2010 11:00 PM
dot?
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07-09-2010 11:08 PM
:> get to work, i wanna read moar!
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07-09-2010 11:17 PM
Dot FTW. Im Workin Im Workin!
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08-09-2010 12:55 AM
I Give you Jewelery AND Guns.Also There Is A Small Hint At The myth Hideout This Chapter.
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08-09-2010 02:52 AM
Chapter 6 Is out.
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08-09-2010 09:57 AM
Little less "Cheese" please xD

but yeah, keep going ^^
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09-09-2010 01:17 AM
Screw You. I Will Rely On myself And myself Only For This Book.
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09-09-2010 01:27 AM
I Know Alot Of Movies. I Will Use Till It Fucking Goes Click And Do you Fell Lucky Punk And YOU DONT LISTEN DO YA!
A Mans Got to know His Limitations Also AK47 The Very best there is,When You Absolutely Positively Gotta Kill every motherfucker in the Room!,Accept No Substitute.Also I will Use Ezekiel 25:17 From pulp Fiction,And I Aint Got Time To Bleed! + Go ahead....Make My Day! Last but not least I'll Make My Own One Liners For My Characters Such As Carl.
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09-09-2010 05:39 AM
Chapter 7 Is Hear.
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11-09-2010 12:46 PM
Really, benson, take odigo's advice. Read some books, practice good disciplines and learn proper formatting. I'm going to be completely honest now. This is unimaginative, poorly written and narcissistic rubbish, but not wholly unsalvageable. You seem to have a colourful imagination when it comes to characters, so work on that.
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11-09-2010 01:45 PM
^Rhys is right, its a good read, but theres a lot you need t improve :/
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12-09-2010 05:59 AM
Im down for my homie rhys. But really? Had to target me like that bruh?
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14-09-2010 04:10 AM
Fuck Discipline,Fuck Formatting,Fuck Odigo,and fuck anybody Who thinks my shit ain't Platinum Or Gold.
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14-09-2010 04:11 AM
Chapter 8 is out.Carl Will be Editing For me After Chapter 10.
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14-09-2010 02:48 PM
After? so i dont get to edit chap 9?
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15-09-2010 12:32 AM
Yeah you can Edit chapter 9 IF YOU GET ON STEAM.
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15-09-2010 12:35 AM
I need sleepz m8
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15-09-2010 01:51 AM
Chapter 9 Is Here. I am waiting For Carls Editing.
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15-09-2010 10:46 PM
Chater nine is out.
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16-09-2010 10:30 PM
Chapter 10 is here.... SOMEBODY POST SOMETHING HERE!!! Questions,Comments? All Rights Reserved,Copyrighted And Patented.
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19-09-2010 03:24 AM
I think I'm Getting Better.
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19-09-2010 03:26 AM
What Do You Think Carl?
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19-09-2010 11:29 AM
Well, i edit it, so i think its a good edit, although we need other peoples opinion.
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19-09-2010 03:12 PM

Posted By Rhys on 11-09-2010 12:46 PM
Really, benson, take odigo's advice. Read some books, practice good disciplines and learn proper formatting. I'm going to be completely honest now. This is unimaginative, poorly written and narcissistic rubbish, but not wholly unsalvageable. You seem to have a colourful imagination when it comes to characters, so work on that.


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23-09-2010 04:52 PM
Everyone post your Feedback.I want to know what you guys think.
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27-09-2010 05:39 PM
I have Released Chapter 15.
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