Fireport, your talking little to fast, but i guess thats how news people are talking on funny radio's xD

but yeah, Almon, i didnt see your post about Embeding, you have copy the "Embed" text you get from Youtube, and then extract the www.youtube.com/eXAmPle inside the long line of weird words thats the "link" you have to use for the embed command

Fireport needs more threedog.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MPxg...re=related

Haha Threedog.
Maybe? xD
I'm going to tie the story in with one of the quests

To you question Fireport, all I have is maybe volume, and to enunciate. Some parts of your words are fading out due to you accent a little bit. The word "Food" was the one I was most picking up on. The 'D' was difficult to hear.

I think those are pretty much the main things, Volume and Annunciation, But that kinda goes for every audio thing on the planet. If people can't hear or understand what your saying they won't be able to find the meaning in it. I love the radio thing though, what a clever idea.

But i didn't say food o.o

0.o but I heard you say something like "foo" like 4 times? I assumed it was "Food".

flu!

.... That would make more sense. Lol, little slower, more enunciation.

Ever watch Cloverfield?

YAH, thats one sick movie

Audio Log #2





Audio Log #3



There I got both of them up. Not sure that they are what you were hoping for, I wrote them in a few minutes. But regardless there you go.

Oh, also If you guys like The audio diaries Of Dareck Jones, You can by all means give advice or suggestions to plot to what should happen in the next one or such. I'm open to ideas..... Hope my voice is nice and clear for everyone.

mmm, Irus, these Audio Logs are nice, you make them sound real like you've experienced something.

still... i feel like your going little to slow, and i wonder how you will make any combat scenes, as your talking in the way your are xD

Few comments, I like all the logs you posted guys since i am a big fan of post apocaliptic audio drama genre.
Irus you do sound like a bitten,or wounded man who tries to leave some track fo his existance.If the story had such a frame than the "slow talk" would be obvious .Now lets pretend that the reason for Jones's manner of speaking is not revealed.

Poor Irus, HES GONNAH DIEH...

we must help him die when the time comes... but yeah, how come i dont any feedback automatically unfair

I wanted to make it sound like he had experienced stuff. He will have audio logs that go to day 4, which is the day he made all of them. Any audio logs after that will be the ones that he's left behind at locations cataloging what's happened to him or whatever.

The slowness is because he's shook up, Like a normal person would be. whatever he's done in those 4 days has caused some bad memories of reliving it.

Don't think I'll make any combat scenes. I will possibly have audio logs after combat though.

Haha I seriously want the dev's to look into this idea of using our audio logs in the game.
It adds a separate element to the game. Adding a more realistic feel of the game.
Letting you feel for the characters in the game. Letting you in on what happened before and after the Pandemic happened.
What do the dev's think? I really don't know.
But I really hope they use our audio logs.
Like the quest could be to search for the person who recorded the audio log or maybe allow you to find audio logs of someone deceased for someone who was living.

Yeah, definitely. We'd have to refine them though. We could start using location names and stuff like that if they wanted to include them. We could even reference other characters, or a character's audio diary. For example Jones listening to the radio station, or making a slight comment on it. etc.

Low and behold the NEW stories of Robert Hojaboom. A twenty one year old kid with nothing going for him except the will to survive. He is a rather depressing kid with no hope for a future yet he clings onto humanity as anyone would. He is still shook up about the whole ordeal and some meaningful things are said into his logs. (a lot in the second that are more emotional "what if's")

Be sure to comment and vote please would love to bring in some free advertising to ZP. Also lets see if I got that whole embed thing working will it work? OHHHH lets find out! Yep still busted. Bah I give up...>.> the links to the first and second for everyone. If you want post the exact code you use and just have a space for < object width and for </object > like what I got lol.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBAFjL9yXtg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uEJEin3S7SM

<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBAFjL9yXtg"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param></embed></object>

<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uEJEin3S7SM"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param></embed></object>

Nah the embed doesn't work.
I'm going to work on the 1am Radio Broadcast tonight

Thats why I posted the links here.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBAFjL9yXtg <---First
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uEJEin3S7SM <--Second

Haha you asked if it worked xD

Also asked for constructive criticism to.

Was in class just now I'll check it out after sch

Almon, Nicer quality with sound, better with emotion, and better with talking speed. You have made definite improvements! Really in depth Logs, but they are fairly lengthly. I'd suggest writing it out, choosing what you want to say the most etc. and then trying to cutting your time in half. I just think that if players find a Audio log that they simply might not want to hear a 5 minute log all the way through (since this is a game most people play when they are budgeted on time) maybe taking down to 3 minutes?

What was that audio news cast file you slipped in? Would that be from a movie or something copyrighted? (without that file it might have been 3 minutes long as well.)

Over all I'm impressed. Your recent ones are better than your first obviously. Things can only get better

I wont say the movie. But I will give you a hint. It's in the special features section of a very populer movie. Perhaps not as great as the first but still good. As for length no biggy that was for the first as a "intro" I also asked friends and they offered suggestions.

1. Sound more interested. I seem to be to dry and not "in the feel" when I am speaking, almost numb or monotone. In a zombie apocalypse I would be more frantic, panicking.
-I will put that into the next instalment to see how I improve on.

2. Get a better mic, speak up (still) and sound less muffled. I always mumble when I speak in my house cause I was raised on the indoor voice...and I don't know why but I feel embarrassed doing them at times wondering what my neighbors would think.

But yeah that about wraps it up. As for copyright...mmmmaaayyybe? But it's on youtube all over so doubt there is big issues. I will put it in my description I guess if it gives any grief.

Haha I think I know whats the movie I think xD

AHA! Awesome Almon

Ok, Almon made another one, guess im gonna do it to then

although, im going to make a little twist

Posted By fireport on 06 May 2010 01:53 PM
Haha I think I know whats the movie I think xD

By all means tell me. Yeah I am thinking of cranking another two out at some point. The effects of Colorado and we will just have to see whats going on eh?

Oh yeah! Are our character's not in the unnamed city then? Cause mine is...