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^^^^Quest Initiation:
Talk to the old mother in the College Campus Sickbay. she tells that her son has been taken by Raider's when they didn't give up their supplies and that they have dragged him to the (INSERT BUILDING HERE) near the southern docks.if he comes back unharmed there is an extra reward.

Accept Quest: she smiles as you go off your way

^^^^Quest Content:
1. Head towards (INSERT BUILDING HERE)
-Zombie smash at the barricaded windows and door's as you make your approach, while others shuffle around blocking your path.

Kill 1 Large group of zombies (this group is near the door blocking it)

2.Enter Building (from backdoor, roof, secret entrance, etc)
-Raider Guard (who holds gun at your face) asks you what you want for coming here and bothering them.

!!SPEECH CHALLENGE ???%!! You were sent here to drop off supplies, given order's from the boss.
-SUCCESS: He says his apologies and points you to the storeroom which he gives you the key for.
-FAILURE: Fight Raider Guard.

3.(Optional) Enter Storeroom
-there some ammunition and weapons that have seen better day's
racked on shelves and in boxes.

4. Enter Backroom
- You find the Woman's son tied to a chair and duct taped, a Rigged bear trap under the boy's leg's seems to set off if he tries to get out and run.

!!TECHNICAL CHALLENGE ???%!! Disarm the Trap and free the boy.
-SUCCESS: boy is freed
-FAILURE: the trap clamp's on the boys leg's. (this looses the Extra reward & -30sp to carry him back)

5. Leave (INSERT BUILDING NAME)

^^^^Quest Completion:

1.Return son to the Mother at the College Campus Sickbay

2.Collect Reward
-Reward (if son is not hurt): ???? + ????(something good)
-Reward (if son is hurt): ???? and a

This is Blue feedback button material

yeah, i could have used the Feedback button. but i felt that it would have been best to post it here first. gets some feedback, suggestions, and other ideas instead of sending it and never getting any responses.

You do get response, the dev's will send you a E-mail on what they thought of your idea

My issue is step one. You kill raiders outside, and then in step 2 tell the raider guard you've come with supplies. Surely he would have heard you shooting and looked out at you killing his fellow raiders? Id make it so there were only zombies you had to kill.

I'd also remove the deny mission choice. We already have the option to accept quests or not. None of the other quests have this deny choice. We don't know if this is the start of an epic 7 quest chain or not.

Apart from that I like it. Especially the skill tests. Its really hard to write these things, so well done. If you're bored write up the buildings external description as well. The less the devs have to do to put it in the game the better.

you raise a good point with the raiders outside and the one inside.

and the reason i put the deny quest option is for people who see the quest and just dont want to do it or have another quest in mind. but thinking about it, yeah its not the best idea.

Posted By CarlBreder on 26-06-2010 04:09 PM
You do get response, the dev's will send you a E-mail on what they thought of your idea

oh....i didnt know that thanks!

^what he said